Once upon a time, there was an elderly couple who knew their
time was coming to an end. Knowing that
their son had given everything he had to help them, they were worried that he
would not be able to make ends meet for his own family once the parents passed
away. With this realization weighing on
them, they sought the counsel of a wise family friend who was very close to the
elderly couple. The family friend
advised them, “Do not worry. When the time comes, send your son to me and I
will make sure he is taken care of.” The
elderly couple thought this meant that the son would be employed by the family
friend and thanked the man graciously. A
few days later, the elderly couple passed away with the son holding their hands
and saying prayers for them as they went.
Right before their eyes closed, the father of the young man told him to
go see the wise family friend within a week.
The young man nodded with tears in his eyes and broke down sobbing when
the two took their last breath. A week
later, the young man put on the best outfit he could find and set off to find
the family friend. He found him in his
shop selling all sorts of knick-knacks and explained to the man that his
parents instructed him to find the man.
The man smiled and told the young man, “I have just the thing for you.” Confused and bewildered, the young man had
given the man $1000 before he even realized what had happened and had a silver
teapot in return. When he returned home, he kept his head down
knowing finances were tight and his poor wife and children didn’t have very
much money left, only this teapot and a couple hundred dollars. His wife thought the grief of his parents’
passing was getting to his head and gently rubbed his shoulders while he sat
down silently. They opened the teapot to
find a caterpillar inside. The children
were fascinated by the insect so the young man and his wife decided to keep it
as a pet and fed it so the children could see it transform into a butterfly one
day and provide them hope. Every day
they fed the caterpillar before they fed themselves, and one day, the caterpillar
broke out of its cocoon and transformed into a butterfly. To the parents’ dismay, it flew away, but
from that day forward, random gems, herbs, and firewood appeared on their
doorstep. When their house had been
filled with valuables, the butterfly returned.
The whole thing seemed quite mysterious and the family attributed their
good will to the insect to the good riches nature had poured upon them.
Author's Note: This
story is a re-telling of The Fairy
Frog which is from Jewish Fairy
Tales and Legends by Gertrude Landa (1919). I chose this story because I
liked the idea of the couple loving their elderly parents for as long as they
could and faithfully following their instructions even though it seemed like a
bleak option in the beginning. It also
showed how much the young couple trusted each other and stayed together thorugh
the good and bad. I chose to do a more
modern re-telling of the story because I thought it would be more relatable to
the reader. For instance, the original story had a market in it and those
aren't as common today. Also, I chose to
use a butterfly as the creature to bless the couple instead of a frog. I chose a butterfly because I felt like there
was a lot of imagery – the cocoon may not seem very hopeful and is not very
beautiful but when given enough time, a beautiful butterfly emerges as the
couple emerged to be rewarded for their generous nature. Overally, I really liked the message so
I tried to keep that the same even though details such as those listed above
were changed.
A viceroy butterfly, similar to the one that the family may have taken care of.
Source: Wikipedia
Oh, changing this to a butterfly instead of a frog is just lovely: butterflies ARE so beautiful and mysterious somehow, especially with their own metamorphosis as you remind us there with the caterpillar. One thing you'll find with the Myth-Folklore class that is really different from Indian Epics: everybody is doing different reading (unlike Epics, where everybody knew the basic plot of the Ramayana, of the Mahabharata, the characters, etc.), so providing a little summary in the author's note for the plot of the original story is a big help. The odds are that the people who read your story here will NOT have read the original Jewish fairy tale, so if you can just provide a quick summary of the plot of the original story in 2-3 sentences, that will help people see what creative changes you made in coming up with your own version! And THANK YOU so much for working ahead like this: yours is the first story for Week 2! :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is such an interesting story. Your story drew me in and I wanted to know what was going to happen next. I would have never thought the guy would BUY a teapot (instead of the guy just giving it to him). Having the butterfly bring jewels and riches is a cool twist. I think you did a great job with this story.
ReplyDelete(Just a note about format: It would be easier to read if your story was separated into paragraphs.)
I thought the ending of the story was really cool. I wasn't expecting that at all! I also like how you changed the frog to a butterfly. I absolutely love butterflies, and I think that it was cool having the family take care of the butterfly and reap the rewards afterwards. I agree with Catherine though, it would be easier to read your story if it was divided up in to paragraphs!
ReplyDeleteAwesome job!